Tuesday, April 8, 2014
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Isabel Allende once said "Heart is what drives us and determines our fate." This means that your heart will guide you on the things that you're willing to face throughout personal life situations. This is true because fate comes on it's own time and will probably lead to something incredible. This can be clearly seen in The statistical probability of love at first sight by Jennifer E. Smith. Being patient and willing to wait is the whole point of fate like for example Hadley met Oliver at an airport and she fell in love with him, after they went their separate ways in London Hadley knew she was never going to see him again but then fate brought them back together eventually.
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you did a good job. your sentences are clear, but the last sentence is a run on. your sentences follow the correct format. You did well by not using I. I only saw two points in your thesis. my only suggestion would be to make sure you do not have any run on sentences.
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You did a good job with your sentences but make sure you follow the format. Make sure that when you are writing don't write any run on sentences I saw one run on sentence. Good that you did not used I in our paragraph. I really couldn't see your 3 points so make sure you include them and make sure people are able to see which are your 3 points. -Maria Hernandez 7th pd
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